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Chapter 11

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'''''head''phones!'''<br>
Here, "head" refers to drugs, as in [http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=head+shop "head shop"].
 
'''Doc noticed (a) it was now dark'''<br>
Should be evening, the thirteenth day of the narrative, Sunday, April 5, 1970.
 
 
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'''Things were weird for a few days with the Dart'''<br>
The timeline gets broken here. From the end of the book to this point--from April 26 to May 8--the narrator has made it easy to follow the events of the book in real time. The narrator puts Doc to bed at night, gets him up in the morning, points out television shows and events. The only break is an "another day" inserted between May 4 and May 5. That makes a total of 14 days in the second half of the book.<br>
The first half of the book, twelve thirteen days up to the "few days" the Dart was in the shop, is much more difficult to match can also be matched with real time events. For example, Doc's parents visit during a division semifinal game between the 76ers and the Bucks. That series was played from March 25 to April 3. None of the games were played on a Sunday, which That would be the day of the visit, if the first day of the book is a Tuesday. It would also mean that the Dart was in the shop for a couple of weeks. Or that some kind of ''Dark Shadows'' parallel time is at work.<br>
'''When he finally went over to pick up his ride'''<br>
Probably morning, Sunday, April 26, 1970. See below for an explanation of "probably". The obvious reference is to the resurrection of Jesus Christ, who also came back on a Sunday. This is not Easter Sunday, though. It occurred on March 29 in 1970.<br>
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